HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)

[Hostbot]

^ why sad sparky? D:

I didn't want to be an assassin

You have one of the best parts! At least you wern't killed!

[Kiyoshi]

Good news! I just submitted it to Bungie! hope to get a response soon! If they like it will be on the Bungie.net Homepage!!!

[a worm]

Good news! I just submitted it to Bungie! hope to get a response soon! If they like it will be on the Bungie.net Homepage!!!

Oh reilly......? And what about Machinima.com? Or are they "not worthy?"

[Kiyoshi]

I HATE Machinima.com ¬_¬ they let anyone onto that site, we would get overshadowed so fast it's not even funny

[Hostbot]

I HATE Machinima.com ¬_¬ they let anyone onto that site, we would get overshadowed so fast it's not even funny

Plus they have copyright infringment rules. Remember what happened when JB partnered with them?

[Kiyoshi]

^ that's not a problem for us, our music is allowed by the band, I've known them way before they had 3 songs out and we good buddies ;D

[Hostbot]

^ that's not a problem for us, our music is allowed by the band, I've known them way before they had 3 songs out and we good buddies ;D

Well then, it looks like you guys are in good shape. I hope S~C is too.
And btw, what if the merge of S~C and JB made it Jester Cow?

[Kiyoshi]

I would fcking LOL....ok no moar speak my thread is being spammed

[Hostbot]

I spamed, how? Really dude check my latest posts. I haven't spammed but in spamertons >_>

[Kiyoshi]

I spamed, how? Really dude check my latest posts. I haven't spammed but in spamertons >_>

These posts have nothing to do with my thread >_<

[a worm]

Well, you may be right about the part regarding the way they decide what videos to upload...I remember that they chose a really crappy Super Mario 64 Machinima that didn't even have voice...only text. We may as well upload, though. Some machinimas are really good. It wouldn't be a bad image since Machinima.com's Youtube channel is one of the most subscribed channels. We could get bigger publicity as machinima director/writer/actors.

[modfox]

Story: Good
Voice acting: Good
Camera Work: Decent
First Person views: Meh
Mic Quality / Volume: Bad

Overall I'd say it's decent for the first in a series, but it needs some work.
Some things from the video I'd like to see corrected.
> When you have someone shooting and they don't know where the person is, make it look more realistic.
> When the guy was being pursued through the small cave, he could have easily been shot, you could have made him just around the corners instead so it was more believable.
> The host should always be the camera man, I know it may be difficult for first person views, but make sure there isn't lag, if you see some, then re-film the scene.
> Some of the camera work was a bit rough, make sure you smooth it out.

I liked the video, you just need to do a few tweaks to get everything down pat, good job! I can't wait to see more!

Oh, also as a side note, you should probably credit the map / tags next time.

[Kiyoshi]

>_>....Who are you?


and i already mentioned the reasons for those flaws

[Fuel]

I just watched it in like 4 min O_O
i liek it

[Kiyoshi]

Bigger screen available nao xD