HUNTED is a brand new series originally by Saber Cow~Ink, but discarded for no plot line ideas, was picked up by us at Reverb Studios. It's our First Major Machinima and we hope you enjoy it....also there is a little eye candy for those who wanted something great back in the day.
Enjoy!
Kiyoshi~ Reverb Leader.
OMG SRY Uber credtiz to Karen as well!!! >.<
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 7:34 pm
by Karen
wow i gets no credit >.>
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 7:34 pm
by Modzy
I can hardly hear anyone. O_O
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 7:38 pm
by Hostbot
Nice. 5/5
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:08 pm
by G[v]N
Modzy wrote:I can hardly hear anyone. O_O
Indeed. Very much indeed. And that is a major problem by itself.
Oh, and the head bobbing. Either non-existent or..bad. You guys need to work on that :\
Aaand the fact that the cameraman was not the host, which led to ugly warping issues. Also, the inexperienced guard who was obviously avoiding shooting the guy in camo.
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:11 pm
by SwordM0nger
Pretty cool, and filming the intro was fun XD
But i have to say, i wasn't really a fan of the first-person views. Also, what map was that snow place? CE map converted to demo?
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:26 pm
by G[v]N
SwordM0nger wrote:Also, what map was that snow place? CE map converted to demo?
Kinda obvious, no?
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:02 pm
by Smythe
Hold on... was that Snow Grove?
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:09 am
by Zanghfei
olly12345 wrote:Hold on... was that Snow Grove?
Yes there is lolz
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:59 am
by Kiyoshi
G[v]N wrote:
Modzy wrote:I can hardly hear anyone. O_O
Indeed. Very much indeed. And that is a major problem by itself.
Oh, and the head bobbing. Either non-existent or..bad. You guys need to work on that :\
Aaand the fact that the cameraman was not the host, which led to ugly warping issues. Also, the inexperienced guard who was obviously avoiding shooting the guy in camo.
The sound issue is why i want a laptop >_< so I can make sure its loud enough, my Mac is too loud so its easy to hear shit
we didn't want headbobbing for serious machinima
I lost my hosting powa and we have yet to find someone with good quality video
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:40 am
by a worm
A little bit of my voice's quiet may have been my fault...I may have forgotten to raise the overall decibel volume of the entire podcast to the maximum number of decibels...although I did do that for the track...so this is probably a variety of factors that do not all point at Kiyoshi. Give him a break...
OTHERWISE...Great storyline/plot
Re: HUNTED Episode 1 (Reverb Studios Series)
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:54 am
by Fonzeh
Was good, plot was nice, feel was nice, it had a nice use of music and custom sounds.
Voice acting was good, although couldve been louder.
Editing couldve been better, i know you are not the best of editors jacob, but there is no better way to get better, than to keep on practicing. This is some of your best work though, dont get me wrong.
I think its awesome how broken iris gave you permission, that is great. It fit perfectly in the movie
Lag was noticable, kind of a deal breaker at some parts. The first person sequences were cool, but were not needed in some parts.
Some Parts couldve been more dramatic, and better shot, like the targets death.
Also, has soon as the guard spoke, i KNEW IT WAS KAYAR!
lol yeah we gotta get him acting again lawlz.
Modzy did a good job, he i think is a perfect voice actor for serious machinima. He has a deep voice thats gives off authority, and makes you think hes older than he really is.
But yeah, those are my thoughts, i suggest you build off the criticism, and make episode 2 even better.